WALT: write a narrative with focus on a powerful introduction
On a Sunday a little girl was walking with her mum to the mall to buy her stationary. After they got there the little girl sprinted into the mall and went to search for her stuff without her mum knowing.
A few minutes later she got lost in the mall and started to cry for her mum. When she finished crying she started to get hungry. So when she was hungry she forgotten that her mum gave her some money to buy her stationary but then she spend it.
An hour later, when she had finished having her lunch, she straight away went to find her way outside and waited for her mum but when she first took her fist step outside she saw her mum.
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