Walt: write collaboratively.
Purpose: To improve my behaviour to make me more acceptable in society.
Success Criteria: 1. Start the paragraph with a topic sentence.
2. Use a variety of sentences. ( simple, compound, complex)
While planting fruit trees at school three friends find an old dirty lamp. They decided to wipe the dirt off the lamp when suddenly a genie appeared and promised to grant them three wishes. Each friend was allowed one wish.
Caring
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Standing up for each other, helping people,
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Responsibility
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Taking care of little children.and many more
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Ketura
In our group we all had to choose one attribute that represented us. We all had very good choices and out of those choices we had to write one paragraph each. These are all our paragraphs that we wrote.
If I had one wish and I had to use it, it will be caring. The reason why I want to be caring is so that I can help the homeless on the streets in Glen Innes when they need something. I have chosen caring in Glen Innes school so I can help others when they are depressed and when they have nobody to play with. Lastly caring at home would be like caring at school and also caring on the streets. For example if my brother was crying and alone then I would go to him and then make him transform into happiness. If I were to work on something it would be caring for other people on the streets at home or even at home.
Lauren
The Attribute I wish for is Loyalty. I’m always loyal to my friends because I stand up for them, Help them and is always understanding. I am loyal to all people, classmates and even adults. At home my brothers are loyal to me and I’m loyal to them. Also at school I’m loyal to the teachers, relievers, guest, principal and people I’ve never met before. To improve I will try not to be as bossy as I am and try to listen to what the person is saying to me not pretending to listen and not know what they're talking about.
I have chose Responsibility.I have chosen Responsibility as my attribute.As I have been doing is looking after my little sister.That is how I can achive my goal as responsibililty.
If a teacher told me to take care of one of the little children in a lower grade then i will do it.I would have responsibility over the child
I need to work on how to show responsibility in front of the other little kids and start standing up for people who are not doing the right thing.
In our group we have all chosen what we are all good at. We have written a few examples of how we have used our attributes.
